Visual Hierarchy - Wk 2 - part 2/3
n this design, we were given a few blocks of text and tasked with creating a visual hierarchy. "Play around with weight, spacing, alignment, contrast (shades of grey), and try to simplify your design as much as possible while still conveying hierarchy. "
For this, I wanted to focus on white space, and how that could bring out contrast without needing to bold everything. I love classic style text and felt it would be more appropriate for a sincere feeling vs. a 'headline' big shouty feel. Playfair offered me a sense of professionalism and whimsy. Lato was clean and easy to read - especially if I had to deal with a much longer post.
I chose a two column layout (across 16 total columns) to help keep content separate (and I loved the extra white space between the columns).
When I thought about design goals, I wanted to the user to focus on the copy if they felt it was something they wanted to read about. I kept the summary / highlight text deliberately lightweight so it wouldn't interfere with reading the copy. I didn't realize it, but choosing a lighter font style added enough extra white to accomplish my goals.
UPDATE: Based on mentor feedback, these are 3 updated variations: TL;DR:
Removed the 3rd column, shifted the timestamp closer to the cutout and experimented with two 2-column layouts.
![feedback - v1.png](https://assets-global.website-files.com/5ebebb0122dc4f1707f755e9/5ec56ed718dd3773d06fa0c6_feedback%2B-%2Bv1.png)
![feedback - v2a.png](https://assets-global.website-files.com/5ebebb0122dc4f1707f755e9/5ec56ed715c9062af7bccd0e_feedback%2B-%2Bv2a.png)
![feedback - v2b.png](https://assets-global.website-files.com/5ebebb0122dc4f1707f755e9/5ec56ed750b87b308a077ddd_feedback%2B-%2Bv2b.png)
These are my iterations to v1:
![Desktop-Original.png](https://assets-global.website-files.com/5ebebb0122dc4f1707f755e9/5ec56ed8d35e776d099e5e14_Desktop-Original.png)
![Desktopv2.png](https://assets-global.website-files.com/5ebebb0122dc4f1707f755e9/5ec56ed718dd37800b6fa0c5_Desktopv2.png)
![Desktopv5.png](https://assets-global.website-files.com/5ebebb0122dc4f1707f755e9/5ec56ed8017db9a758eb7ee3_Desktopv5.png)
![Desktopv4.png](https://assets-global.website-files.com/5ebebb0122dc4f1707f755e9/5ec56ed802a5f4340f1f2296_Desktopv4.png)
![Desktopv3.png](https://assets-global.website-files.com/5ebebb0122dc4f1707f755e9/5ec56ed8017db9df70eb7ee4_Desktopv3.png)
In terms of visual path, my take on this is:
1: Headline
2: Author
3: Summary
4: Copy
5: Date
6: Carousel arrows
In the copy text, I chose to bold the first two as they would accomplish a few objectives:
- Pull the eyes toward the copy text after reading through the summary / highlight, add a sense of gravity to the authors first choice of words, and to add enough weight where the eyes wouldn't naturally drift back to the headline.
I kept the date toward the very bottom as that would allow easy scalability for anyone who wanted to see (quickly) how recently the article was written. Additionally, I wanted to keep the users eyes focused on the post itself, and date/time is an identifier, not actual content.
I added the shadow box and carousel arrows as it was hard for me to envision this as a static landing page.
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